Analysis of Have you



Have you any idea what humans can achieve..

Have you moved your gaze beyond the lust that saturates our needs.

Have you wondered who we really are and why we stand so tall...

Have you wondered on reality and if it's real at all...

Have you wondered if we are player's in some strange game...

Where the winners are the losers when the victims get the blame...

Is there a magic mirror that let's us see our face...

Or do we just accept their facts and get caught up in the race...

The human is infinite. No AI could understand.
We are Spirit, Soul and Body
Perfectly planned.

To nurture the earth  with thanks giving and with a loving hand...
To provide God with pleasure as we share in His command.

To give God a harvest that was our hire.
But the fruits rotten, needs a fire!

Evil taken hold
Sprouting lust
And greed:

We bitch and moan
Fight and scrap
Lie behind each other's back;
Cheat on our wifes
Kick the dog
Rob the widow
Play with our nob.

What a joke we all must be.
A withered branch from a mighty tree.

He saw what was going on,
No one left!

Sent His Son.

Veil
Torn look
Find out who
You are to me

Not some fluesy
Not some punk.

But a kindred Spirit
Of Almighty God.

A grafted branch
On the Ancient Vine.

Nourished by mother earth
That is His design.

Battle is here
Victory
Have no
Fear.


Scheme X A B B C C D D EFE EE GG XXX XXXAXHX FF XX X XXXF AX XX XI XI XFHX
Poetic Form
Metre 1110010110101 11111010111101 111011101011111 1110110011111 1110111100111 101010101010101 11010101111101 111101110111001 010110011101 11101010 1001 110011110010101 10111101110101 111010111010 101101010 10101 101 01 1101 101 1011101 11101 101 1010 11101 1011111 010110101 1111101 111 111 1 11 111 1111 111 111 101010 10101 0101 10101 101101 11101 1011 100 11 1
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,339
Words 311
Sentences 25
Stanzas 22
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 3, 2, 2, 3, 7, 2, 2, 1, 4, 2, 2, 2, 2, 4
Lines Amount 46
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 45
Words per stanza (avg) 11
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Written on July 04, 2023

Submitted by myway6119 on July 04, 2023

Modified by myway6119 on July 04, 2023

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