Analysis of Abiamo



Abiamo by Abayomi Habib,Nobel luarate

You are my mother whose hope died in the grave-yard,

And I remember the day you became pregnant after sexual pleasures,

Then I Dance to the night as a miracle of the family house,

How many years will become a woman of the house ,

And you gave hope from childhood,

You are Abiamo that gave birth to me,

How many years will you stay with me as a mother who died young to save me,

Then I will dance to the night as a hope of giving birth to me,

When the dance of the motherhood laugh at me during  nine months pregnancy,

You are Abiamo and I stay as a figure of the night,

As all hope was gone to the grave-yard,

I remeber with a figure of hope,

Dear Mum,Rest in peace


Scheme A A X B B A C C C C A A X X
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 111101110011 0101001101101010010 11110110100101001 1101101010101 011111 11111111 1101111111010111111 1111101101110111 10110101111011100 1110111010101 111111011 11101011 1101
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 716
Words 166
Sentences 1
Stanzas 14
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 39
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 39
Words per stanza (avg) 10

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Submitted by yomihabib on June 28, 2023

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