Analysis of Choices

Steve Cochrane 1955 (Cape)



When I was young, I hurt my back
But not enough to pay
Someone to make it go away
Or lessen each attack.

The doctor said I needed to
Learn how to manage it,
Since otherwise I was quite fit
And exercise will do.

That's what I've done though I do lack
The energy for all
The effort though I do recall
What caused pain in my back?


Scheme ABBA CDDC AEEA
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 11111111 110111 1111101 110101 01011101 111101 1101111 01011 11111111 010011 0101111 111011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 329
Words 73
Sentences 3
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 84
Words per stanza (avg) 23

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Philosophy

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Written on June 14, 2023

Submitted by stevec.24118 on June 14, 2023

Modified by stevec.24118 on June 16, 2023

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