Analysis of Across The Fence



The writer always
wants to sing
And the singer
wants to paint
The painter fancies  
he could dance
To the dancer
songs conflate

The greenest grass
it seldom grows
Where you now
make your bed
As wishes stray
and hopes betray
What might have been
—instead

(Dreamsleep: June, 2023)


Scheme XXAXXXAX XXXBCCXB X
Poetic Form
Metre 0101 111 0010 111 01010 111 1010 101 0101 1101 111 111 1101 0101 1111 01 11
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 282
Words 52
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 13
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 74
Words per stanza (avg) 16
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on June 09, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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