Analysis of Prickle Prickle Little Cactus

Kiana Dobre 2010 (Washington)



Prickle prickle, little cactus,
Stretch your spines up to the sun,
Let the shy soft morning daylight
Warm your branches, and grow on.

Prickle prickle, little cactus,
Stretch up high and grow away,
Wind around in spiny flurries
Till the moon waves the sun away.

Prickle prickle, little cactus,
Watch the bats and moths at play,
As they dance under the moonlight
And open blooms to the moon’s silver ray.


Scheme Axbx Acxc Acbc
Poetic Form Quatrain  (67%)
Metre 111010 1111101 1011101 1110011 111010 1110101 10101010 10110101 111010 1010111 1111001 0101101101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 406
Words 80
Sentences 3
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 106
Words per stanza (avg) 23

About this poem

This poem was inspired by my love for cacti and plants in general.

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Kiana Dobre

I am currently twelve years old and love cats, reading, writing, nature, and video games. I also feel strongly about fairness towards plants. more…

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