Analysis of I Couldn’t Let Go of the Pain

Oscar Auliq-Ice 1994 (Port Elizabeth)



For a long time, I held bitterness in my heart,
A grudge that tore my soul apart,
I couldn't let go of the pain,
And anger was all that remained.

But then I saw the harm I caused,
And realized how my bitterness paused,
All the joy that could've been,
If I had let forgiveness win.

So I made a choice to forgive,
And let go of the hurt I lived,
It wasn't easy, but it was right,
To finally see the world in a new light.

And now my heart is light and free,
From the anger that used to control me,
I'm grateful for this change of heart,
And the peace it brings to every part.


Scheme AAXX XXBB XXCC DDAA
Poetic Form Quatrain  (25%)
Metre 101111100011 01111101 11011101 01011101 11110111 010111001 1011001 11110101 11101101 01110111 110101111 11001010011 01111101 1010111011 11011111 0011111001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 575
Words 136
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 108
Words per stanza (avg) 30
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Written on March 11, 2023

Submitted by Auliq-Ice on April 16, 2023

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