Analysis of -The Scar's Enchanted-



Enchanted she the girl with scars upon her face,
Restless though her soul might be, she still the light will chase.

Her eyes tell far more than her mouth could ever say,
she sees things for how they truly are and still she heads the day.

No soul, no rhyme or reason, can change the girl for worse.
She knows too much about the world to believe in such a curse.

Still she walks with heart, and a light upon her chest
A target seen as some, but a warrior to the rest.

With her shield down by her hip, this girl she walks along,
knowing it may invite more pain but feels to hide is wrong.

This girl she is enchanted, like a corpse back from the grave.
She's weathered the weather, war and famine, and still feels as though she's not brave.

So why does this girl enchanted walk with such a heavy heart?
The dichotomy of her eternity continues to tear her apart.

To live is to die and to die is a waste of such a chance to live.
To feel something worth feeling, to get what she only yearns to give.

This girl-she is enchanted, yes, but at what cost greatly met?
The scars you see upon her face are not her only debt.

She's faced consequences of her actions, and received actions unjustly served.
She's received consequences of the actions of others unobserved.

She's faced monsters and ghouls and those of unholy rest,
She's shattered glass and suffered shards embedded deep into her chest.

She's felt the grip of mortality and the aching fever of death itself.
She's broken hardened chains that tried in vain to bind her to herself.

She's felt the sting of mocking whispers sung by shadows baring teeth.
She's endured the venom of snakes who aimed to bury her deep beneath.

War itself may not the answer be but within war can be found.
Her precognizant intelligence earned from those who had her bound.

Enchanted she the girl- who feels not enchanted be.
Seen only true by those who dawn the same scars such as she.

Warrior recognizes warriors and warriors recognize pain.
Alike and like- to like and love, forever truly gain.


Scheme AA BB CC DD EE FF GG XX HH XD DD II JJ KK LL MM
Poetic Form
Metre 010101110101 1010111110111 011111011101 111111101011101 1111110110111 111101011010101 111110010101 01011110100101 1011101111101 10110111111111 11110101011101 110010101001111111 111110101110101 0010010010001011001 11111011101110111 1110110111110111 111101011111101 01110101110101 111001010001100101 10110010101101 1110010110101 1101010101010101 1101101000010101101 1101011101110101 110111010111101 10101011111100101 1011101011011111 0101001111101 0101011110101 11011111011111 1001001000100101 01011101010101
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 2,037
Words 418
Sentences 27
Stanzas 16
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 50
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 100
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Written on December 30, 2022

Submitted by M.Schunemann on April 10, 2023

Modified by M.Schunemann on April 10, 2023

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