Analysis of I Want a Girl. (Just like the girl)

Leonard Wilson 1948 (Washington state)



I do my own two-part harmony, here. Still looking for a fifth member to complete my barbershop quartet.
++++++++++++++
+*I Want a Girl*+

I want a girl  
just like the tramp
that buried dear old dad

(Dear old daaaaaaad)

She was his niece
and the only piece
 that daddy ever had

A sweet old fashioned slut
who knew the score
Easy piece of butt
and daddy's whorrre...

I want a witch
 just like the bitch that
buried dear old Daaaaaad!
++++++++++
As Jim Carrey said in Mask,
"Was that over the top?
I can never tell!"


Scheme a B Bxc a ddc efef xxa xxx
Poetic Form
Metre 11111110011101011010111001 1 1101 1101 1101 110111 111 1111 00101 110101 011101 1101 10111 0101 1101 11011 10111 1 1110101 111001 11101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 538
Words 113
Sentences 7
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 1, 3, 4, 7
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 62
Words per stanza (avg) 16

About this poem

This is an irreverent parody of an old barbershop standard.

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Written on March 06, 2023

Submitted by lenadrwilson on March 06, 2023

Modified on March 11, 2023

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Leonard Wilson

I used to write songs for a rock band in California. I write poems, lyrics, opinion And noir crime stories set in the 40s, 30s and 20s. more…

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