Analysis of Walls
Lerato Mbokane 2005 (Leslie)
Brick on brick plastered with cement
Row by row ,
I've built these walls
that have created a garment
For my bleeding hands.
Hear me oh walls , when shall you speak ?
I know you listen to my sad songs and sobs ,
Feel my touches and punches ,
Hear my chuckles and laughs,
my chest and throat tightening in response.
An armor - you have become.
Whilst I lay here and smile at my discomfort and delicately brush my fingers against my
creation , my nightmare.
You shake and rumble
As I start to release a cackle
That burns my mouth and tongue ,
Crack my muscles and break my teeth.
These rows of bricks have tumbled upon me and hugged my body tightly.
Dents have ected themselves on my face and hands .
A lonely smile creeps on my face with my eyes wide open , I've heard you , my masterpiece.
Row by row ,
I've built these walls.
Scheme | aBCdefghijklmnnopqerBC |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11110101 111 1111 11010010 11101 11111111 11110111101 1110010 111001 1101100001 1101101 11110111010010001110011 01011 11010 111101010 111101 11100111 11111100110111010 1110111101 01011111111110111110 111 1111 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 825 |
Words | 167 |
Sentences | 10 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 22 |
Lines Amount | 22 |
Letters per line (avg) | 29 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 639 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 163 |
About this poem
Walls is a poem about loneliness leading to insanity.
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Written on August 03, 2022
Submitted by leratombokane02 on January 03, 2023
Modified on March 14, 2023
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