Analysis of To The Shimmering Stars



They expected a flame,
She was a wildfire they were unprepared for.
You called her crazy because you could not handle her. But there was nothing wrong with her, only you.
A mosaic of broken glass,
A beautiful work of art to some, a danger to others.
She was cold as ice and would leave you longing for the burn, the passion, and the pain.
She was not flawed, she was herself... You simply could not handle her gleaming smile, her power, her voice, her independence, and her peace. She wore her scars proudly, and you shook in fear.


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Poetic Form
Metre 101001 1101010011 110100111110011110110101 00101101 010011111010110 11111011110101010001 111111011101110010101001001000111011001101
Characters 534
Words 105
Sentences 9
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 7
Lines Amount 7
Letters per line (avg) 59
Words per line (avg) 14
Letters per stanza (avg) 411
Words per stanza (avg) 99

About this poem

About those women, those who brighten every room they walk into. To those who shine without trying.

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Written on January 13, 2023

Submitted by 4kids4god on January 13, 2023

Modified on March 28, 2023

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