Analysis of To be seen To be heard



I am hurting, my self worths plummeting.
Got no direction ,need to take some action.
Every fraction of every minute, all I see is it going a waste.
A torturing soul with a never ending desire to be seen to be heard,
 And it still hurts.
Time !! you stole from me so much
And now all I am is lost.

Fate!! I demand you pave my way.
I wanna be seen I wanna be heard.
 I am more then what I feel,
 I want to believe , so desperately on words nobody is saying.

Help!! I am hurting, To the Universe and Heavens above I beg,
Send me some love, an inspiration to turn my visions into  perspirations.

I am stuck I am blocked.
Still breathing, still hoping ,
With a soul that so badly wants to be unlocked.
Tick , tick it goes,
 The clock I set , to be seen to be heard.


Scheme AXXBCXX XBXA XC DADXB
Poetic Form
Metre 1110111100 11010111110 10010110010111111001 01001101010010111111 0111 1111111 0111111 11011111 1101111011 1111111 1110111000111110 1111010100100111 1111101011110011 111111 110110 101111011101 1111 0111111111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 766
Words 170
Sentences 16
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 7, 4, 2, 5
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 142
Words per stanza (avg) 39

About this poem

Lost soul, stuck talent, broken resolve,change ,action

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Written on January 20, 2023

Submitted by adoradmello on January 20, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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