Analysis of Days
Danielle Tavares 1975 (San Bernardino)
Days:
There are days I wake up with the weight of my broken heart so heavy I can barley breath.
Days that I wake up so angry at the tragedy of your death that I want to scream.
Days that the tears ebb and flow so freely as if it were just yesterday that you were taken from me.
Days that the memories we shared flicker just out of sight and mix with the memories we don’t get to make anymore.
But then there are
Days that I wake up and feel the slightest warmth on my face and smile.
Days that I can hear a song and instead of cry I laugh.
Days that I am reminded of just how wonderful you were.
Days that show me grace and comfort.
Days of gratitude for being your mom no matter how long or short that may have been.
Days with pride that you saved others lives with your own.
Days that I know with so much certainty that you are right beside me in everything I do.
So no matter what Day I am waking up to.
Know that I take you with me.
I take you down the road of sorrow as well as the road of joy.
I hold you in my heart with every beat.
I share in you my laughter, my tears, my pain, my pride and above all my love.
I love you more my sweet boy
#forever24
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1 1111111011110111011101 111111101010011111111 110110111011101101101011 1101001110111101101001111101 1111 1111101010111101 11111010011111 111101011110010 11111010 11101101111011111111 111111101111 1111111100111101101011 111011111011 1111111 1111011101110111 11101111001 1101110111111001111 1111111 010 |
Closest metre | Iambic heptameter |
Characters | 1,178 |
Words | 262 |
Sentences | 17 |
Stanzas | 2 |
Stanza Lengths | 18, 2 |
Lines Amount | 20 |
Letters per line (avg) | 45 |
Words per line (avg) | 12 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 447 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 122 |
About this poem
This poem is for my son who was killed April 20,2020
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Written on January 03, 2023
Submitted by Toothfry32 on January 05, 2023
Modified on March 14, 2023
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