Analysis of Cocaine and Blue Eyes



a sonnet type love letter for a lover and a friend who i hope never forgives me


Scheme A
Poetic Form
Metre 0101110101000111110011
Characters 79
Words 17
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
Lines Amount 1
Letters per line (avg) 63
Words per line (avg) 17
Letters per stanza (avg) 63
Words per stanza (avg) 17

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Cocaine and blue eyes Her lips quiver slight When she oaths those old lies She cries at night Hurting from those goodbyes Pockets empty always He swipes his card tonight She's ashamed now It hurts everytime he pays She's bad but her heart aches She feels selfish and greedy She can't help but take "Why do you still entertain me?" "Because without you my insides ache." Her forgiveness will never come Sinful behaviour, sacrilege The imperfect Saint Used and abused by scum "You're undeserving of this," She apologises "Never again, I promise," She lies Maybe not today, maybe not tomorrow Her heartless sadism is inevitable

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Written on January 27, 2023

Submitted by delaineyengelbrecht on January 26, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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