Analysis of This is My Universe

Melody Rosalynn Daff Samson 1977 (Harrisonburg, Va)



How do I articulate,
what I sit back and speculate.
Cold nights breeze
The universe on its knees.
I scream what I spectate,
These lost eyes
Look up to my skies,
As I perceive the world.
Strange phases take place,
Feeling the presence,
So ubiquitous,
Utterly ambiguous,
Other worldly ambitions.
What do I really see,
A mirror in me.
Racing to the end
My journey flows.
Space and time wont bend
It's just myself
In my end it's my friend.


Scheme AABBACCDEFGGHIIJKJLJ
Poetic Form Tetractys  (30%)
Etheree  (30%)
Metre 111010 1111010 111 010111 11111 111 11111 110101 11011 10010 10100 1000100 1010010 111101 01001 10101 1101 10111 111 011111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 435
Words 94
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 339
Words per stanza (avg) 80

About this poem

Just a time of reflection for me as I was sitting outside.

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Written on February 03, 2023

Submitted by melodydaff77 on February 07, 2023

Modified by melodydaff77 on February 07, 2023

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Melody Rosalynn Daff Samson

I grew up in a small college town. I spent alot of my childhood outdoors, but I also spent alot of time writing. Today I live in a small town, I have four lovely children. Writing has always been a calling for me. I love Oscar Wilde, and Jim Morrison. I enjoy Shakespeare. I enjoy reading on many different topics. more…

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