Analysis of Pared Ice



Perhaps for pared eyes a pair of dice conclusion-wise :)

The music is quiet
The light is serеne
We are like in
Slow motion film

Or maybe standing still
Like rocks, yet
Rock and rolls begin
The moment you are in
Ta-dah!

Or, Sire, is it not what you have dreamed about?

Overall, and speaking out loud
The dreams we all are left without
While being led by lies of yours?

Where I suppose, you need a course

Cadetto, no, - intercourse
    Instead of whining

Then how about sense of smell
Of that shithole for you to dwell
Then interface your feelings and the taste?

Topiya′s interface for you to conquer
First needs to be created, Uncle
And I, Andrusha Smyk concur,
Whatever lies in there can be yours!

Cadetto, take it!

Like beach of Troy?

Yes, Sire! With fifty men if you desire

Cadetto, more!
    The more, the merrier!!!
    Just take them all!

Success, indeed, is waiting like a bliss
As well as smell you have created
As well as the abyss we face

While facing it we are without Moses
Who could have lead us in this World
Or is it not proclaimed like Bill of Rights, at all?

Cadetto, this is more about not just in, but...

In and out?

Omnibus of your life begins and will be like ...

The Bill of Rights?!

No, Sire! Not enough, and not so soon!
We shall consider that one ...

Cadetto, no!
    To да moon!

Why don′t you try to use Imagination?
Imagine that inevitable happens, yet
It better would be intertwined ...

With our nation?
        Or is it with the whole divine?

Extrapolate, when you are dead,
What else does come to mind?

Think of Death and ...

Cadetto, no!
    Да shithole will suffice!

Are you surprised, or am I puzzled?
By Merry, or is it Webster’s Merriam
The definition of a ...

Cadetto, no!
    It can′t vary

Yet Fathers of this Land
Who once proclaimed the Bill of Rights
I hope dreamed with you at nights

Your daily skill reminding others
Of that bill produced at most
Other kind of bills, which I suppose ...

I serve them still?

Cadetto, wow!
    What да ...
    Smart person
    With да ...
    Strong will!
    (Applauds)

Although postponed, like Moses
As well as other promises of yours
Mr. Biden, you are the worst
Among the latest two who represented USA,
On top of that you are, indeed, IO of Uncle Sam!

Your PARADISE is going to be CANCELED
VOID at any day as well as it - for them
Unless, you try to be that Moses
Who leads us as it has been claimed!

Can I remind you that when you face Death
Your "bill" is due IMMEDIATELY
Upon the meeting, hence,
as your "lawyah fuck" friends
Would put it in:
"Who is the fucker who is talking?"
I have invited you before as well as Mr. Putin

My name is Andrei Smyk
This poem too, if you desire,
Can be your invitation, Sire

Remember, please!  
Your courage being patient
Will get noticed, and behold!

By  fuckupees of US congress?

Not only! Be admired by the nation,
And the World!
And I live not that far away
Not leaving yet and I would say
It does not qualify to say - AWAY
(At Clear Lake, CA in USA)

Remember, time is running out
Come to see me, please!
And I will try to help about
Your concerns, yet my question is
Are you ready to die, Sir?

Too soon? Am I trying to scare you?
Oh, Dear! If you think that way, then
Please, don′t interfere!
Just send someone to see Andrei

Who is your trusted pioneer
Like we are all in heart - as one!
For each of us and all for ...

Yes, you are included to support
If time allows could be more
Although not now! It will be then!
Sire, or is it Sir?
I wonder, what would you prefer?
Amen?

Andrei Smyk
A Russian American with a Ukrainian last name
Inviter of Church RAZOOM

(This title, hopefully, can fit the bill :)
where I am, supposedly, an invitee to be,
let not inventor, yet not the inverter of the common sense, who needs to be invited for a dance,
and not invaded like my Motherland, indeed)


Scheme x abcd efccg h xhi j jk llx mxmi x x m nmo xxx pqo a h x r st Us tfv tx xv x Ux wxg Ub xrr xxx e xatxex pixxx wxpx xbxxckb kmm yxx p tqxxxx hyhxm xz1 x 1 tn xnzmmz kxd ebxx
Poetic Form
Metre 0111101110101 010110 01111 1110 1101 110101 111 10101 010110 11 110111111101 1001011 01111101 11011111 11011101 1110 01110 1101111 1111111 110110001 111011110 111101010 011101 10101111 111 1111 110110111010 11 010100 1111 0101110101 111111010 11100111 1101110110 11111011 111101111111 1111011101 001 100111010111 0111 1101010111 1101011 11 11 11111110010 010101000101 11011001 11010 11110101 0101111 111111 1110 11 1101 110111110 11011110100 001010 11 11110 110111 11010111 1111111 110101010 1110111 101111101 1111 11 1 110 1 11 01 101110 1111010011 10101101 0101011010111 11111101101101 1101101110 11101111111 011111110 11111111 1101111111 111101000 010101 11111 1110 110101110 11010101111101 11111 110111010 11101010 0101 1101010 1110001 111110 11010101010 001 01111101 11010111 111101101 11110111 01011101 11111 01111101 10111101 1110111 111110111 11111111 11101 111111 1111001 11110111 1111011 111010101 1101111 1111111 101111 11011101 01 11 010010010010011 1111 1101001101 1110100100111 110101101101011111010101 01010111001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 4,104
Words 847
Sentences 70
Stanzas 45
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 5, 1, 3, 1, 2, 3, 4, 1, 1, 1, 3, 3, 3, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2, 2, 3, 2, 2, 1, 2, 3, 2, 3, 3, 1, 6, 5, 4, 7, 3, 3, 1, 6, 5, 4, 3, 6, 3, 4
Lines Amount 126
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 63
Words per stanza (avg) 16
Font size:
 

Submitted by Andrei_Smyk on February 05, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

4:14 min read
3

Andrei Smyk

A Russian American with a Ukrainian last name :) more…

All Andrei Smyk poems | Andrei Smyk Books

0 fans

Discuss this Andrei Smyk poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "Pared Ice" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 2 Jun 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/150036/pared-ice>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    June 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    28
    days
    7
    hours
    36
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    Who wrote the poem "No Man Is An Island"?
    A Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
    B Ezra Pound
    C Robert Browning
    D John Donne