Analysis of What he doesn't know



Unable to explain the reaction you cause,
Caressing and kissing my flaws.
Stealing all of my self control,
And setting a fire in my soul.

Exciting chills penetrate my skin,
As you ever so slightly grin.
Whispering into the darkness,
Taking pleasure in making me breathless.

Our bodies passionately intertwine,
But you are not truly mine.
My heart does so ache,
Of this I dont know what to make.

As the moon now fades,
Rushing emotions invade.
Such a friend to my demons,
How could you be this reason.

The need to have you close is dire,
Pure untouchable burning desire.
Could you truly be,
The missing part of me?


Scheme XXAA BBCC DDEE XXXX XXFF
Poetic Form Quatrain  (40%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 010101001011 01001011 10111101 010010011 01011011 11101101 10001010 1010010110 10101000001 1111101 11111 11111111 10111 1001001 1011110 1111110 01111111 1010010010 11101 010111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 617
Words 133
Sentences 10
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 97
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Written on December 28, 2022

Submitted by CraziKris on December 28, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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