Analysis of O can I be your only?



I'm hurting oh woman can you see? why do you say your hurting boy? cause I'm waiting in vain for your love. I don't want to wait in vain for your love can't you see? I follow my heart o girl. Now I know I'm way down on your mind girl please think of me! In this life I know there's a lot of pain but your love is I relief. In life I know there's tons of grief but your touch brings me tons of joy when I'm with you I'm fine and happy! It's cold outside I'm in the rain and your presence is the sunshine to me to my veil on my eyes! cause summer is gone o fall is here mmm! the seasons are here and I'm here please come to me o woman please chase after me. mmm! winter is gone spring has arrived if you won't be mines I'll shed many tears IS IT reasonable and feasible that I can become your boyfriend and have no other one before me. Please darling don't take complete advantage of me and I my Lord watches like a protector of my heart. please my internal being is weeping like a small kid don't see my vulnerability as weakness cause you can't steal my love from Jesus CHRIST and God the Father and the spirit of them both talkin bout the oneness of the Father and the son.


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Characters 1,175
Words 240
Sentences 16
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
Lines Amount 1
Letters per line (avg) 903
Words per line (avg) 240
Letters per stanza (avg) 903
Words per stanza (avg) 240
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Submitted by christian.nickson on January 03, 2023

Modified by christian.nickson on January 03, 2023

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