Analysis of When I Die

Lucus Rougeou 1978 (Louisiana)



What will be said when I die?
Well anyone even mourn or cry?

The life I've lived has definitely been a tough one.
I hope everyone knows how much i really loved them.

I wish Ida done things differently i really really do.
I should've took my blessings and handed them all off to you.

Life is short it goes by n a flash.
Looking forward to the future regretting some of the past

I fought the fight of faith the very best I could.
Although all i did wasnt always good.

Please! Please! Please! Hear my Plea.
When you recall remember the good in me.

Please remember the memories that we shared
And though I didn't always show it always know that I cared.
 


Scheme AA XX BB XX CC DD EE
Poetic Form Couplet 
Metre 1111111 11010111 0111110001011 111011111011 111011100110101 110111001011111 111111101 101010100101101 110111010111 1111111 111111 1110100101 10100100111 0111011111111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 658
Words 143
Sentences 16
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 72
Words per stanza (avg) 18

About this poem

Wander what will be said about you at your funeral?

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Written on December 29, 2022

Submitted on December 29, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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