Analysis of One day I will break free



One day I will stop crawling like a worm
In the shit dump of my life
Break free from the cocoon of misery
And be reborn, beautiful as a butterfly

One day I will stop fearing the heights of failure
Stop flapping in vain against adversity
And like an eagle, my wings will grow
And I will soar high into the sky...free

One day, like a young turtle
I will break out of the sands of doom
Run, though without legs
And reach the sea of success


Scheme XXAX XAXA XXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1111110101 0011111 1110011100 01111001010 111111001110 11001010100 011101111 011110101 1110110 111110111 11011 0101101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 448
Words 93
Sentences 2
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 114
Words per stanza (avg) 29

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Submitted by GIDRAF on December 29, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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