Analysis of The waiting room
Recently, life has been about the waiting room
“Next! Not you.”
“You can return tomorrow”
This waiting room is full of people with various ailments
Some basking in the length of time it takes to meet the good doctor and others like you and I
You and I came for a cure but we cannot afford the hospital bill paid with patience
You and I are growing weary of how much time we’re spending here when we could be there
The waiting room is not kind to you and I
Everyone picks up how tense we are
The staff use our impatience to taunt us
And perhaps promise under their breathe to never work with us
So are we in God’s waiting room
Weary and impatient
Concerned about time and who is served first
We lack the mentality of the man who walks into the waiting room ready to wait
We walk into the waiting room with failing ventricles and a paling body ready to give in if the doctor performs no miracle in the nick of time
But we have a faithful God
Your patience is met with the utmost diligent service
He resuscitates your spirit
And sucks out the blood trying to clog his word
He lays you down to recover so that you may live to tell the story of your savior
Scheme | A XX XB XX BXCC AXX X X XCXXX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 100111010101 111 110101 110111110110010 11000111111101100101101 101110111100101011110 101110101111010111111 01011111101 10111111 01110010111 001101011110111 11101101 100010 0101101111 1100100101110101011011 1101010111010011010110101001110000111 1110101 1101110110010 11110 01101101111 1111101011111110101110 |
Closest metre | Iambic heptameter |
Characters | 1,173 |
Words | 235 |
Sentences | 3 |
Stanzas | 9 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 2, 2, 2, 4, 3, 1, 1, 5 |
Lines Amount | 21 |
Letters per line (avg) | 44 |
Words per line (avg) | 11 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 102 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 25 |
About this poem
This poem may be viewed as a Christian piece that reflects a period in your Christian walk where you wait for God to deliver something that you have been praying for. What this piece seeks to reflect is that you are not alone during this time of the wait and not to lose your faith in Christ.
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Written on November 16, 2022
Submitted by gontesrebecca on November 16, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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