Analysis of हरवलेली आई

Rutik prakash bhongade 2001 (Yavatmal)



सकाळी उठायला हाक मारणारी ती आई,
           दुर जाण्यासाठी का गं केली तु घाई,
       या चिमुकल्या पाखरांची होती तु चिऊताई,
              का सोडून गेलीस माझी आई.

जेवण भरवणारा तुझा तो अमृत हात,
              पंढरपूर जिथे दिसे ते तुझे पाय,
           अशी अमुल्य होती, ती माझी माई,
              का सोडून गेलीस माझी आई.

मला लागल्यास वेदना तुला होई,
         अजुनही आठवते आई तुझ्या त्या अंगाई,
       तुझ्या साडीला पाहून पुन्हा तुझी आठवण येई,
             का सोडून गेलीस माझी आई.

तु होतीस तर सर्व नाते माझे होते,
            तु गेलीस तर सर्व नाते परके होते,
          पुन्हा वापस ये अशी हाक माझी येई,
                का सोडून गेलीस माझी आई.


Scheme
Poetic Form Palindrome
Metre 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1
Characters 1,515
Words 117
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 0
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 0
Words per stanza (avg) 24

About this poem

This poem is dedicated to mother , and whose children who lost his mother ( means his mother is gone death) .

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Written on October 02, 2022

Submitted by rpbhongade on October 08, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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