Analysis of My star



The sky is filled with many stars
but some stars are called the brightest star
I refer to this star as you
your heart was kind and true
when I need to talk to someone I could count on u
i wish could show my love to my star
can have a long drive in his favorite car
for a short time, we were together
I thought it would be the start forever
I am your sky,
u are my star ,
I know no matter how hard I try
u are still way far
I think of u in my silence,
I often speak your name
All I have are memories
And your picture in a frame
your memory is my keepsake with which we will never part,
God has u in his keepsake
i have u in my heart
everyone says love is what all u need
but for me love is u indeed
I know that time will not come when we were together
but your love and belief in my heart
 it feels like u will walk with me forever


Scheme ABCCCBBDDEBEBFGHGIJIKKDID
Poetic Form
Metre 01111101 111110101 10111111 111101 111111111111 111111111 11011011001 101110010 1111101010 1111 1111 111101111 11111 11110110 110111 1111100 0110001 11001111111101 111011 111011 101111111 11111101 1111111110010 111001011 11111111010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 836
Words 192
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 25
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 641
Words per stanza (avg) 184

About this poem

Written for someone who meant a world to me but have been died in covid ... dedicated to him

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Written on May 29, 2021

Submitted by Bhavyagajja on October 05, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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