Analysis of MEMORIES



MEMORIES
I was able to write in time
The feeling not sired
The moment still desired
And the memories still a bliss
Boy I tell you
In the breeze your cologne became my boo

The rays bounced layers of beauty in waters
But your face the only explicit layer of colours
Grass blades shone of due
But your smile the only fathom per due

We lived in the moment
I loved each memory
The sun's scorch so intimidating
But your voice rattled the jiggles of time
Boy I tell you
They were times forever plastered

Sweet was the venture
I only wish for more adventure
Maybe a sling bag for two
Will carry the steps forward too
I only had a glimpse
Can you blame me wanting again the bliss
I hoped for time still
Maybe then I could forever live the time loop
Boy I tell you
They were memories
Don't think it's easy to rid me
I want more

By Chege Harriet


Scheme abccdEe xacc cfxbEc ggecxdxxEafx c
Poetic Form Tetractys  (27%)
Etheree  (27%)
Metre 100 11101101 01011 0101010 00100101 1111 0011010111 01110110010 1110100101011 11111 1110101011 110010 111100 01110100 111100111 1111 10101010 11010 110111010 1001111 11001101 110101 1111100101 11111 101110101011 1111 10100 11110111 111 11100
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 839
Words 168
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 7, 4, 6, 12, 1
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 134
Words per stanza (avg) 33

About this poem

It is about a lady who had a nice time with a lover by only walking with him. She feels it time went by quickly and she writes to him demanding more and maybe carrying a sling bag for more adventure

Font size:
 

Written on October 01, 2022

Submitted by chegeharriet164 on October 01, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

51 sec read
1

Harriet Chege

I am a student passionate about writing poems. My motivation is usually from my feelings and reaching out to them. more…

All Harriet Chege poems | Harriet Chege Books

1 fan

Discuss this Harriet Chege poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "MEMORIES" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 2 Jun 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/143193/memories>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    June 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    28
    days
    12
    hours
    53
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    Who wrote the poem "School Boy" as a part of the poetry collection entitled "Songs of Experience"?
    A Robert Frost
    B William Blake
    C Walt Whitman
    D William Wordworth