Analysis of Losing A Child



Losing a Child

Losing a child is pure hell
It rips your heart out.
It tears you down to your very soul

Losing a child
Threatens your sanity
It kicks you down to your lowest point

Losing a child
Makes you feel like you should be the one in the casket
Makes you so depressed that you wish you were dead

Losing a child
Makes you so angry at God and you shout at Him and ask "Why?"


Scheme A xxx Axx Axx Ax
Poetic Form
Metre 1001 1001111 11111 111111101 1001 101100 111111101 1001 1111111010010 11101111101 1001 111101101111011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 383
Words 86
Sentences 3
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 3, 3, 3, 2
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 59
Words per stanza (avg) 16

About this poem

This poem was written five years after my son passed away at twenty-eight. Writing this poem opened the flood gates of grief I had experienced after losing my first-born child. This poem is also an expression of the grief I feel five years after losing my daughter at thirty-four.

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Written on October 22, 2012

Submitted by sharonc.96900 on October 28, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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