Analysis of I MATTER!
I look down
Towards the ground
Not making eye contact
To scared to look up
At the elders
Who guide me
Towards a better future.
A future of their choice,
A future they deem perfect,
A future not of my choice.
I too think the path by elders
Is filled with glory
But, it lacks,
Something, it lacks
And that's MY HAPPINESS.
A small wish
To choose my own path
Each step at a time
Towards the future
Choosen Not by some elder
But by me, myself
So, I look up
Straight to their eye
And say "I MATTER!"
to the overbearing elder
Who look at me with awe
Questioning themselves
And me as well.
As to who the child before them is
The same child who never
Met their eyes
Never looked eye to eye
The same child who did
What she was told to do
Never raising a single mark
Had said" I MATTER!"
which rang in their ears
Like a symphony .
Scheme | XXXABCD EXEBCFFX XXXDDXAGDDXXX XDXGXXXDXC |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111 0101 11011 11111 1010 111 0101010 010111 0101101 0101111 11101110 11110 111 1011 011100 011 11111 11101 01010 111110 1111 1111 1111 01110 10101010 111111 10001 0111 111010111 011110 111 101111 01111 111111 10100101 11110 11011 10100 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 826 |
Words | 180 |
Sentences | 7 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 7, 8, 13, 10 |
Lines Amount | 38 |
Letters per line (avg) | 17 |
Words per line (avg) | 4 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 159 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 41 |
About this poem
The poem is about how a young child has his/ her future decided without their consent by the family members and parents. They are thrive the path chosen for them not the path they wish to walk on.
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