Analysis of Betrayed me



You were the song that always feels me,
The melody of northwind,
Blowing through our seas.

But now the hate has grown inside you,
Your sun has turned to dark moon,
Shadowed light to bloom.

Till date, even when I dream,
I can't stop the memories,
Of everything you did to me,
You betrayed me.

We always saw the silver lining,
Old friend, you were my life's sing.
Tu étais ma chérie.

But now the hate has grown inside us.
We're friends but now we're fighters,
It wasn't meant to be.
You betrayed me.

I knew, even in my dreams,
I wouldn't stop the memories,
Of everything you did to me.
You betrayed me.


Scheme axb xxx xbAA ccx xxaA xbAA
Poetic Form
Metre 10011111 010011 101101 110111011 1111111 10111 1110111 1110100 1101111 1011 11101010 1110111 11111 110111011 1111110 110111 1011 1110011 11010100 1101111 1011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 607
Words 139
Sentences 10
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 4, 3, 4, 4
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 76
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Submitted by karinadomospiff on October 30, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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