Analysis of Beautiful rose

Ryan Mentoor 1998 (Muizenberg)



One sunny day i walked through the fields moving my head from side to side,
I caught a glimpse of a beautiful rose;
So tender and so soft
Butterflies were moving around in the air,
As i closed my eyes for a moment,
I had a vivid image of you standing right there.
My heart began to beat fast,
My eyes filled with a sparkling light.
I swear you were so beautiful standing under the sunlight,
I whispered to myself :
Beautiful rose,
Would you be my date for one night?


Scheme ABCDEDFGGHBG
Poetic Form
Metre 11011110110111111 1101101001 110011 1001001001 111111010 1101010111011 1101111 11110101 11101100101001 11011 1001 11111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 468
Words 100
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 365
Words per stanza (avg) 91

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Written on October 20, 2022

Submitted by Ryanmentoor on October 20, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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