Analysis of Elise



I was meant to be named Elise
but my aunt stole that name away from
my mother—from me

I never felt like an Elise anyways,
but even so I’ve always felt a strange ownership
of the name and when the girl named Elise sat
in the back of my painting class, I felt a kind of
kinship to her, perhaps in name or what might
have been in name.


Scheme XXX XXXXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11111101 111111011 11011 1101110110 11011110110 10101011011 0011110111011 1100101111 1101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 337
Words 71
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 3, 6
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 129
Words per stanza (avg) 35

About this poem

This poem was based on a true story. I was supposed to be named Elise and I shared a paint class with a girl with the same name. Naturally I had to write a poem out of it.

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Written on 2020

Submitted by lifeasalyric on November 06, 2022

Modified on April 14, 2023

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