Analysis of Elise
I was meant to be named Elise
but my aunt stole that name away from
my mother—from me
I never felt like an Elise anyways,
but even so I’ve always felt a strange ownership
of the name and when the girl named Elise sat
in the back of my painting class, I felt a kind of
kinship to her, perhaps in name or what might
have been in name.
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11111101 111111011 11011 1101110110 11011110110 10101011011 0011110111011 1100101111 1101 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 337 |
Words | 71 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 2 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 6 |
Lines Amount | 9 |
Letters per line (avg) | 29 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 129 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 35 |
About this poem
This poem was based on a true story. I was supposed to be named Elise and I shared a paint class with a girl with the same name. Naturally I had to write a poem out of it.
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Written on 2020
Submitted by lifeasalyric on November 06, 2022
Modified on April 14, 2023
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