Analysis of Meet Me At The Dawning



Meet me in the morning.
Dawning upon the horizon.
Leaving behind those yesterdays.
Filled with sorrows and kept remorse.
Like a bad marriage staying in it,
Needing a divorce.

Meet me.
Leaving behind those miseries.
Leaving behind those sad memories.
Left when the dawn of morning,
Rising with nothing wished to mourn.

Remove that crap saddled on your back.
And move on.
To welcome the dawn.
Remove all the B.S. that deludes the facts.
And move on.
Knowing your life to live blessed to get,
Is deserving of joy and happiness.
You have got to plant that seed.
In your mind,
Fed to keep this belief.
Only you can stay determined,
Not to feed upon what you don't need.

Meet me at the dawning in the morning.
To share and not to care a despair,
With others.
Meet me at the dawning in the morning.
Knowing what was yesterday,
Tomorrow isn't there.
To want with a wish to relive.

Leave that to the people.
Doing their best,
To stop a future...
With a throwing of rocks.
As weapons to use everywhere to drop.

Hoping to block out the rising Sun.
And minds unaware,
Of what's being done.
To move humanity forward.
Without looking back.
Wishing to relive,
Those yesterdays gone to prolong.

Meet in the morning.
Together we will witness dawn.
Appearing upon the horizon.
No matter what had been going on.

Let's meet in the morning.
With nothing else to do but seek,
Joy and happiness.
Kept to keep with faith and belief!

'Okay.
I'm here.
Why are you so cheerful?'

Why shouldn't I be?
Have you ever witness,
The Sun rising upon the horizon?
It's as if,
Whatever happened yesterday.
Today?
Doesn't matter.

'So...
Does that mean,
The money I owe you...
And promised I would pay you back,
Months ago.
You will forgive and forget about it?'

Well...
Some things,
Are possible to forgive and forget.

Other things,
Kept to remember.
Are impossible to forget.
Especially...
When some people promise,
To do something not to do.
But...
Insist to keep me reminded of it.

'Oh.
So what are you saying?'

I am hoping when dawn appears,
Upon the horizon.
It will also dawn in your head as well!
That is why,
I invited you to have us both...
Witness this miracle.

And, I am not?


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Poetic Form
Metre 110010 10010010 1001110 11100101 101101001 10001 11 10011100 100111100 1101110 10110111 011110111 011 11001 0110110101 011 101111111 1010110100 1111111 011 111101 10111010 111011111 1110100010 110111001 110 1110100010 101110 01101 11101101 111010 1011 11010 101011 110111011 101110101 0101 11101 11010010 01101 10101 1101101 10010 01011101 010010010 110111101 110010 11011111 10100 11111001 1 11 111110 11011 111010 0110010010 111 101010 01 1010 1 111 010111 01011111 101 1101001011 1 11 1100101001 101 11010 10100101 010 111010 1110111 1 0111101011 1 111110 11101101 010010 1110101111 111 101011111 101100 0111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 2,191
Words 496
Sentences 70
Stanzas 16
Stanza Lengths 6, 5, 12, 7, 5, 7, 4, 4, 3, 7, 6, 3, 8, 2, 6, 1
Lines Amount 86
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 103
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Written on October 29, 2022

Submitted by lpahtillah on October 29, 2022

Modified on March 27, 2023

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