Analysis of चांद थे वो कभी आसमां के मेरे - SJT

Poetry Of SJT 1996 (Madhya Pradesh)



कल तलक जिसको समझाता रहा,
आज देखो वही समझदार हो गए,
हमसे करते रहे वो बेवफाई सनम,
गैर के होते ही वो वफादार हो गए,

चांद थे वो कभी  आसमां  के मेरे ,
मेरे दामन के अब दागदार हो गए ,
जिस सितारे से कल किया रूबरू ,
उसकी रौ�
नी से चमकदार हो गए,

जिन किनारों ने बहने दिया न कभी,
वेग से बह के पानी की धार हो गए,
सागर से  मिलने की  तमन्ना  लिए,
स्वार्थ की नांव बनाकर सवार हो गए,

ख़ुद बाज़ार का  उनको होने न दिया,
पर वो ख़ुद में ही ख़ुद बाज़ार हो गए,
देखते  देखते  क्या से  क्या हो गया ,
प्यार के अब बड़े  खरीददार  हो गए,


Scheme
Poetic Form Palindrome
Metre 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1
Characters 1,264
Words 132
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 5, 4, 4
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 0
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 0
Words per stanza (avg) 29

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Written on September 11, 2022

Submitted by sjthindustani on September 11, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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