Analysis of Tum sath hoti to acha hota

Anas Ansari 2004 (Jhalu)



tum sath hoti to axcha hota.
aaj safar me tumhari kami khaye ja rahi hai kassh ki tum sath hoti.
wadiyon me se hoker jab jab train guzar rahi hai tumhari yaad aa rahi hai.
jab jab ye jharne aa rahe hai tab tab tumhari yaad aa rhi hai.
jab jab train se nazara mil raha hai ghatiyon ka tab tab tumhari yaad aa rahi hai.
kash tum sath hoti.
dono chai ki chuskiyo ke sath ye nazare dekhte kudrat ke to alag hi baat hoti.
ye thandi thandi hawaye mujhe tera easaas dila rahi hai.
kaash kaash ki tu sath hoti to alag hi baat hoti.
jab jab train tunnel me jati tab tab tujhse door hone ka ehsaas hota.
mera man hai ki kaash ye raat na dhale kabhi na dhale na kabhi ye safar mukammal ho.
but fir khayal aata hai ki tu sath nhi hai.
tujhe sath hona chaiye tha yrr saxch me tu sath hoti na to dono ek seat per chipak ker beth te or haseen nazaro ka maza lete.
kaash ki tu sath hoti.


Scheme AABBBAABAABBAA
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 11111111111111 111111111111111 111111011111111 11111111111111111 1111 1111111111111111 1111111111 11111111111 111101111111111 111111111111111111 1111111111 1111111111111111111111111101 11111
Characters 871
Words 194
Sentences 14
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 48
Words per line (avg) 13
Letters per stanza (avg) 677
Words per stanza (avg) 181

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