Analysis of She deserves more than she got

Neha Diwan 2002 (Saharanpur)



Her life was a common story
Not even a soul was sorry.
She mended broken pieces
But didn't get time to pick hers.
She was compromising
But no one valued her value.
Her tears were visible
But hands She wants to
Hold on were invisible.
Living her dreams through her blood
No one came forward to hold on.
She was always joking
But no one saw her worries behind it.
Her life is confined in these changing walls
Yet she still stands on a single call.
She lived through others happiness
And no one let her say her sentence.
She still cries for her stillborn
Yet no one ever have that date known.
She doesn't have too much money
But she still fills every life with honey.
She just prayed, not for her
But the ones she cared for.


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 732
Words 154
Sentences 12
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 23
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 569
Words per stanza (avg) 138

About this poem

It's reflection of life of a mother. How she sacrifices herself for the ones she love.

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Written on August 02, 2022

Submitted by nehadiwan0001 on September 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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