Analysis of Our little secret



You were the sun
I was the moon
We never shine on the same time ,
Amd never on the plane.
When I rose, you disappeared ,
The night sky and the stars
Adored me they said that
I am not as harsh as you.
But I never told them that
I shine to my brightest
Because of your rays
Because I never want to lose my sun
And that was 'our little secret'.


Scheme ABCDEFGHGIJAK
Poetic Form
Metre 1001 1101 11011011 110101 111101 011001 011111 1111111 1110111 111110 01111 0111011111 011101010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 349
Words 84
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 260
Words per stanza (avg) 74
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Submitted by komalmohan162005 on September 06, 2022

Modified on April 26, 2023

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