Analysis of My gift to you



My gift to you

The hardest thing I did was live
Thinking I had nothing to give
I couldn't take anymore; I wanted to die
So suicide I gave a try

I swallowed some pills and slit my wrists;
Laid down for what seemed like a bit

When I woke up the pain was worse
Cause suicide is such a curse

For some odd reason I didn't die
I could give my life another try

I can now look back and see that
Suicide reinvented me

I've learned to take it day by day
Cause not all pain is here to stay

For those of you who want to die
Give your life another try

When you look at me, its not suicide you'll seee
For I once was you, and you are now me

I'm sharing my story with my life to live
THIS is what I have to give

Please give your life another try
People like me don't want you to die


Scheme X ABCC DX EE CC XF GG CC DF AB CC
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 01011111 10111011 11010111011 1101101 110110111 11111101 11110111 1101101 111101101 111110101 11111011 1000101 11111111 11111111 11111111 1110101 11111111011 1111101111 11011011111 1111111 11110101 101111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 777
Words 176
Sentences 1
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 54
Words per stanza (avg) 15

About this poem

its about suicide its about life its about finding the courage to live its about living its about surving pain its about me

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Written on November 05, 2019

Submitted by elizajane727 on September 12, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Elizabeth Jane Beaver

my name is Elizabeth I write out my pain and feelings as best I can when I have the courage, I share them more…

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