Analysis of Spoiling



Quiet night
walk in
not to the
bright light.

Bright light
tightly sealed
apart from

apart from a table
and a chair,

there wasn't
any other
furniture

for that matter
any other
future...

Instead,
at the very invited
of the chair,
got the green right
to sitting
on both sides
of the seat-
 at the same time.

The closeby
table- distributing
disturbed

slapped
my entire-being;

The nearby
lamp
slapped;

Other members
of the room
shocked
slapped- shaking

just a while
before spoiling
my chair
in their
prior prefered
presence.

Further,
one of them
caressing
in turn
the sleepy cat's
left hand:

''Haven't you
convinced yourself
yet
what you arenot
capable to acquire it
a (the) skill
is
your very rare,
precious
act
of gratitude(s)?.''

for
the bright light
arrived
certainly not to
the quiet night...

The audience
nevertheless willing,
nature willing-
to even
acts by acts.


Scheme abxA Axx xc xDd dDd xxcaexxx fex Ge fxG xxxe xeccxh dxexxx ixxaxxxcxxx xaxia heebx
Poetic Form
Metre 101 10 110 11 11 101 011 011010 001 110 1010 100 1110 1010 10 01 1010010 101 1011 110 111 101 1011 01 100100 01 1 101010 011 1 1 1010 101 1 110 101 0110 11 01 1001 10 10 111 010 01 0101 11 101 0101 1 111 10010101 001 1 1101 10 1 1101 1 011 01 10011 0101 0100 00110 1010 110 111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 912
Words 184
Sentences 8
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 2, 3, 3, 8, 3, 2, 3, 4, 6, 6, 11, 5, 5
Lines Amount 68
Letters per line (avg) 10
Words per line (avg) 2
Letters per stanza (avg) 45
Words per stanza (avg) 10

About this poem

Thanks to Author (UGAZ)YAN LIANKE from page 198.

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Written on September 30, 2022

Submitted by Kekewani on September 30, 2022

Modified by Kekewani on September 30, 2022

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