Analysis of Waiting for you



The incessant shower with monotonous sound,
let my soul to be less strenous.
The nip in the air with gusty blow,
let my sprit to be very low.

Inside the dense, sitting the bird
hiding itself in ambush.
The crystals of foilages are dripping
"Tip, Tip" and making the sound of soothing.

Someone, covering the head with palm leave,
walking "Splash, Splash, Splash, Splash.
I am waiting, sitting by window
and my feverish brain, cooling new.

The overflowing water from gutter'
let me utter,
Water, water everywhere,
how can i have little bit drinkble water?

Suddenly it comes to my mlnd,
how shall I find to my very near
if the incessant rain
will prevent you to come very near.


Scheme AXBB XXCC XXBX DDXD AEXE
Poetic Form Etheree  (35%)
Quatrain  (20%)
Metre 001010101001 1111111 010011101 11111101 01011001 100101 01011110 1101001110 110001111 101111 111010110 011001101 010010110 1110 101010 1111101110 10011111 111111101 100101 101111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 678
Words 137
Sentences 8
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 106
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Submitted by swarup on September 29, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Swarup Bhattacharya

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