Analysis of Neither The Loser Nor The Chooser



           Neither The Loser Nor The Chooser

Get up, you are not a loser

It's neither your fault nor you were the chooser.

Hold a little more, you are about to get the shore

It's just the ocean of golden lesson,

That makes you lose and regain to realize value with impression.

Get up, you are not a loser

It's neither your fault nor you were the chooser.

It was the fault of ancestors, who acted like alligators

Using their pre-existing quality to dominate,

They killed thousands of their own kind in bate.

Get up, you are not a loser

It's neither your fault nor you were the chooser.

It was necessary, to provide them acidic berry

So that they could engage with suffering,

Before peeling the impartial human rind with hustling.

Get up, you are not a loser

It's neither your fault nor you were the chooser.

In the entire journey, you just need to be your own attorney

Where the beginning is much chaotic

That will give pain in your optic.

Get up, you are not a loser

It's neither your fault nor you were the chooser.

It's just a battle, against yourself with lots of struggle

When you realize and count all the messes

These are only emerging inside your mind making you obsess.

Get up, you are not a loser

It's neither your fault nor you were the chooser.

It's the tactic of God, to keep you busy in own life road

Teaching you another diamond lesson,

Not to use your prime upon others under aggression

So, no need to fear, just live and learn the habit of confession.


Scheme a A A a b b A A x c c A A a d d A A x e e A A x x x A A x b b b
Poetic Form
Metre 10010101 11111010 1101111001 1010111011101 1101011010 1111001110101010 11111010 1101111001 11011101101100 1011010100110 1110111101 11111010 1101111001 11100101101010 1111011100 011000101011100 11111010 1101111001 00010101111111010 1001011010 11110110 11111010 1101111001 11010010111110 1110011010 1110010011110101 11111010 1101111001 101011111100111 1010101010 11111011010010 1111111010101010
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,519
Words 336
Sentences 12
Stanzas 32
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 36
Words per stanza (avg) 9

About this poem

The poem consists of 31 lines using core rhyming. I hope it will meet your expectations.

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Written on July 30, 2022

Submitted by Clochard on August 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Clochard

One of the versatile & creative writers , firdous alam was born in 1998 , 11th may in northeastern region(Nagaon, Assam) of india. He is well known for his unique mixture of different literary genres and devices . Most of his writings are associated with both the fiction and non-fiction narrative and he himself loves to write in "free-style". His writings are based on the realistic incidents of human life that provide some moral, important and crucial point of views which are necessary for everyone in order to live a happy & peaceful life. Apart from this, an extraordinary love for animals can be seen in his books as a main theme. As one of the youngest writers of the world, he loves the writings of Shakespeare, Charles Dickens, Jane austen, George Eliot, George Orwell, TS Eliot, Tennyson, Virginia Woolf, James Joyce, DH Lawrence, William Wordsworth, John Milton, Charlotte Bronte, William Golding, William Butler Yeats, William Blake, Harper Lee etc and they have influenced firdous to be the craziest and demented fan of english literature . In terms of his achievements as a scholar, he won district level story writing(2020) competition, state level essay writing competition(2018: organized by Bharatiyon Itihaas Sankalan, Guwahati) and scored 100% in National Level Quizzes on English Literature(2020 organized by Govt. TCL P.G. College, Janjgir, Chhattisgarh ). He started his writing career at the age of 19 and wrote almost six ebooks which are available in Kindle US, UK, Germany, Italy, France, Japan, India, Mexico and in other Amazon market places. Recently, SUPER7 poetry jury has recognized him as among INDIA'S top-100 poets for his performance in National Poetry Contest 2021. Bio is available here :- amazon.com/author/firdous more…

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