Analysis of Ma comète☄️
Gracheillou Navaira 2022 (Davao City)
Amidst of my darkest night
Realms of my deepest, blackest sky
Nothing's change, Nothing's new
Hard sigh goes through
Sun means reality
Moon brings serenity
Till beyond and infinity
Stars shines luminously
In the depths of space
Upon it's shadow-steady pace
Showed up with flaming crest
Tail's speed in endless quest
At the moment my world freeze's
My eyes glazing as it amazes
As far as two billion miles—
In two seconds, it creates piles
Of inexplicable smiles.
A lover, as you think I am.
Of a comet that does not give a damn.
As you come near to me,
Is it enough for you just to see?
Soudaine. Ma comète d'amour
Blizzardly ranging in the opposite direction of sunlight trails
Flaming snowball, I feel
Soudaine. You're falling—I fell first.
All these whispered wishes
My lips are longing for that kisses.
The pessimism in my heart takes over; the acrimony I feel makes me shiver.
Apprehension—I noticed.
You want to step back.
I said "no please."
You hate how things can feel so right.
You said, "you don't see the sunlight, it's not so bright."
What else can I do?
To keep myself from unloving you?
My comet is not a meteorite
We both know our time isn't right.
I just want to be with you,
but why does it hurt when I grasp to hold on to you?
All I ever wanted was to be part of your light in your heart,
To tie a knot and never be apart.
But as what i see
You're fading as u used to be
I know you're just passing by
And you know I hate goodbye's.
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 0111101 11110101 101101 1111 1110 110100 10100100 111 00111 0111101 111101 110101 1010111 111011010 1111101 01101011 101001 01011111 1010111101 111111 110111111 11111 11000100010111 10111 1110111 111010 111101110 01000111100100111110 1 1 010110 11111 1111 11111111 11111011111 11111 111111 110110100 111101101 1 1111111 1111111111111 1110101111111011 1101010101 1 11111 11011111 1111101 011111 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,499 |
Words | 314 |
Sentences | 21 |
Stanzas | 10 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 5, 4, 4, 10, 5, 5, 4 |
Lines Amount | 49 |
Letters per line (avg) | 23 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 112 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 28 |
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Written on July 28, 2022
Submitted by gracheillou.navaira on August 03, 2022
Modified on May 03, 2023
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