Analysis of A Given Transformation
I am the power of my words.The exact reason I am lit.
Electrifying my heart with a scorching desire is innesstial to indulge into one's selfish fire.
What happens when he rips off the wings that I use to soar the skies for pleasure?
"Come to me.
It's okay, I know it's beautiful up there but I also know it's too much for you to handle.
Yes, come back down.
Good."
Let me inhale the fumes of your verse, of you, of yourself, deep into my lungs.
Let me show you the structure of your mind and to exhale you within the waves of my quiet tides.
I watch your soul as it leaves your lips, I see the cloud of grey smoke that you create through your subconscious.
Why do you bathe yourself with insults?
You see, dreams are whirlwinds of unachievable prospects. Set your limits to unachievable to be successful and you shall strive.
My intelligence has been repeatedly disgraced. My perception has been cleared from all the broken promises...
Yet I'm still not arrogant.
If I am wanted, I don't have to continuously fight for a spot. I used to banish my demons till you taught me to slay them.. moving forward
I currently prefer to dissect them and see what they're feeding on.
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Metre | 110101110110111 0100111010010111010111010 1101111011111101110 111 11111100111110111111110 1111 1 1101011111110110111 111101011101011010111101 1111111111101111110111010 111101101 111111110111011110100111 1010011010001101011111010100 1111100 1111011110100011011111011011111111010 11000110110111101 |
Characters | 1,177 |
Words | 237 |
Sentences | 20 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 5, 3, 2, 4 |
Lines Amount | 16 |
Letters per line (avg) | 57 |
Words per line (avg) | 14 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 183 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 43 |
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Written on May 21, 2020
Submitted by A.m47 on August 23, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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