Analysis of I Don't See Why

Agaba Witness 2998 (Rukungiri)



Like a rope of sand,
Love seeps through my hand:
It starts seemingly strong
But ends just along.

Why be in such a stagnant sea
So-called love I cannot see?
I don’t see why
'Tis wrong this to defy _

At least for once for rest
Till one shall prove the best
I’ll find my lane
For a while to walk alone.


Scheme AABB CCXX DDXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (33%)
Metre 10111 11111 111001 11101 11010101 1111101 1111 1111011 111111 111101 1111 1011101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 305
Words 68
Sentences 3
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 76
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

This poem is solely based on my love life. When love is just starting, it's just stronger than anything else. But it doesn't take longer than it collapses shortly after a simple misunderstanding. So, I decide to be me until I find one who appreciates the ME .

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Written on August 16, 2022

Submitted by Rutainikwa on August 22, 2022

Modified by Rutainikwa on December 21, 2022

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