Analysis of INNUMBERABLE SIZELESS SHOE



Don't you notice
your words are
a bit
older than you?

Don't you want
your friend(s) be
your age
then
why
don't you call
it a day
whenever you're
coerced to compose something?
coerced something to compose something?
coerced by, compose by?

I'm afraid
if otherwise-
you insist,
they are
deepest fit
courted foundation.

Don't you want
your friend(s)
corner your choice?
your errands?
your words?

Promise,
don't dare
to cut me-
time and again,
I know I swear you didn't!
Alas!,
Friend to me
is
my words not cut
younger than me, cut!
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Inspiration and dedicated tribute to
Libyan ATO OMAR MUKTAR
for his pristine, emprical African wisdom- to his very son!
and to every Libya and Libyan full peace dreamers/dream relays!


Scheme abcd Efxghxxxiih xxxbcj Exxxx axfgxxfxkk dbjx
Poetic Form
Metre 1110 111 01 1011 111 1111 11 1 1 111 101 0101 0110110 011010110 011011 101 110 101 11 101 10010 111 111 1011 110 11 10 11 111 1001 1111110 01 111 1 1111 10111 1 01001000101 1001101 111011001011101 011001000100111011
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 730
Words 145
Sentences 13
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 11, 6, 5, 11, 4
Lines Amount 41
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 92
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Written on August 22, 2022

Submitted by kewakewani on August 22, 2022

Modified by kewakewani on August 22, 2022

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