Analysis of Why love me



Why love me?
See, this girl not only is she beautiful
But she’s a queen
See she’s so strong that if you try and compete
You’ll only fall short to your knees
Her walk is so powerful
And her steps are so steep
Girl please, you wish you  can be me!

She wears her heart on her sleeve
Displays her scars and bruises flawlessly
Walks with confidence & authority
She’s addicted to quality
She puts nothing before Loyalty
Y’all
She Expresses her pain through her poetry

Surrounded by angels, blessed with foresight
Even Satan himself, seeks refuge from her light
Protected by the source
For her sources are pawns
Remember she’s a Queen , the most dangerous one
Check mate! Ha!
Two spaces forward & one step back
She’s overcome each obstacle & every single setback
Her tears bring joy , they rain down when she’s mad
Her smile brings peace & confusion.. oops my bad
Damn where was I at?
Oh yeah..
Like a bad habit it’s hard to break her
If you knew better you wouldn’t forsake her
Like patron on ice, straight with no chaser
She’ll devour your soul , send you back to your maker……

So….Why hate me?


Scheme ABXXXBXA XAAAABA CCXXXXDDEEXXFFFF A
Poetic Form
Metre 111 11111011100 1101 11111111001 11011111 0111100 001111 11111111 1101101 0101010100 111000100 10101100 111001100 1 10100110100 010110111 101001110101 010101 101011 010101011001 111 11010111 1101100100101 0111111111 0111010111 11111 11 1011011110 1111011010 1101111110 1010111111110 1111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,137
Words 223
Sentences 10
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 8, 7, 16, 1
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 212
Words per stanza (avg) 51

About this poem

This poem is about a girl who finds her self worth

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Written on July 12, 2022

Submitted by sherneciamartin01 on July 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:06 min read
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Shernecia Martin

Shernecia is a unique individual who loves living life and taking risk! She’s loved by many and loves to love. She enjoys reading, writing, singing and just being a light to such a dark world. more…

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