Analysis of Neither a loser nor the chooser
Clochard 1998 (Assam)
Get up, you are not a loser
It's neither your fault nor you were the chooser.
Hold a little more, you are about to get the shore
It's just the ocean of golden lesson,
That makes you lose and regain to realize value with impression.
Get up, you are not a loser
It's neither your fault nor you were the chooser.
It was the fault of ancestors, who acted like alligators
Using their pre-existing quality to dominate,
They killed thousands of their own kind in bate.
Get up, you are not a loser
It's neither your fault nor you were the chooser.
In the entire journey, you just need to be your own attorney
Where the beginning is much chaotic
That will give pain in your optic.
Get up, you are not a loser
It's neither your fault nor you were the chooser.
It was necessary, to provide them acidic berry
So that they could engage with suffering,
Before peeling the impartial human rind with hustling.
Get up, you are not a loser
It's neither your fault nor you were the chooser.
It's the tactic of God, to keep you busy in the own life road
Teaching you another diamond lesson
Not to use your prime upon others under aggression
So, no need to fear, just live and learn to confession.
| Scheme | A A x b b A A x c c A A d e e A A d f f A A x b b b |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 11111010 1101111001 1010111011101 1101011010 1111001110101010 11111010 1101111001 11011101101100 1011010100110 1110111101 11111010 1101111001 00010101111111010 1001011010 11110110 11111010 1101111001 11100101101010 1111011100 011000101011100 11111010 1101111001 1010111111000111 1010101010 11111011010010 1111111011010 |
| Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
| Characters | 1,209 |
| Words | 266 |
| Sentences | 10 |
| Stanzas | 26 |
| Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
| Lines Amount | 26 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 36 |
| Words per line (avg) | 9 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 36 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 9 |
About this poem
The poem has 26 lines(5+5+5+5+6) and is written using simple rhymes. I really don't know whether it willl meet your standard or not. I am really feeling unconfident, shame, and I am really nervous because the Jury members are really experienced in poetry zone. I am saying Sorry in advance if you find any mistake in my poetry.
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Written on July 30, 2022
Submitted by Clochard on July 29, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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