Analysis of Lovers



Star-crossed lovers,
With eyes full of wonder,
One still loves the other,
But he does not bother.

The mistakes he has done,
The disappointment he gave her scared him
And so he ran and ran,
Until he could no more.

He sighed in relief, thinking he outran the past,
He did not bother on looking back.
He knew nothing, that the past was right in front of him
Smiling, laughing, and talking to him.

Everytime he looks at her,
Feelings rekindle inside of him,
No, no. This is not what he wanted.
He wanted peace, he did not want to be bothered.

May he find eternal peace someday.


Scheme XAAA XBXX XXBB ABXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 1110 111110 111010 111110 001111 001011011 011101 011111 110011010101 111101101 1110101110111 101001011 101110 100100111 111111110 110111111110 11101011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 585
Words 128
Sentences 8
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 89
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Written on July 25, 2022

Submitted by ansarcuevas on July 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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