Analysis of Break me

M.R.P 2000 (Bushbuckridge)



Beaten, bruised, broken
Nothing worse can happen
Wrung I won't ooze
I have nothing to lose

So finish me
To beyond repair
I no longer care
Leave me wishing for a nightmare
Like Jonah in the sea
Throw me off board  to the fish
Like Job leave me where
Despair feels pity
Take me to the city
Of wilderness
Of no return

Break this system in my head
Leave me feeling dead
Let suicide be afraid
To come and lie on my bed
Scatter my pieces to places
Leave no traces, so they not found
So I remain a broken piece

Break me, give me no break
Break me till God breaks you
Till God restores me
To truth, not to before


Scheme AABB CDDDCXDCCXX EEXEXXX XXCX
Poetic Form
Metre 10110 101110 1111 111011 1101 10101 11101 1110101 110001 1111101 11111 01110 111010 1100 1101 1110011 11101 110101 1101111 10110110 11101111 11010101 111111 111111 11011 111101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 607
Words 125
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 11, 7, 4
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 119
Words per stanza (avg) 31
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Written on 2018

Submitted by proxj707 on July 24, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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