Analysis of When an ambulance is passing by



I always was painful
i feared the sound
went out of my mind
went after it
even if the sound and
light disappeared
the echo remained and
bothered me
no matter who was in there
it didn't matter with me
i didn't swear but
it was a wish
i didn't want to see

This morning
ambulance arrived late
at the hospital
my friend couldn't no longer live
even when dawn came
i could not sleep
my hate killed my friend
there was a poor friend in it
now
i don't suffer from the ambulance
i pray that it arrives on time
save people.


Scheme AXXBCXCDXDXXD XXAXXXXBXXXA
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Metre 11110 1101 11111 1101 101010 101 010010 101 1101101 1101011 11011 1101 110111 110 100011 1010 11101101 10111 1111 11111 1101101 1 111010100 11110111 110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 515
Words 104
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 13, 12
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 203
Words per stanza (avg) 52
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Submitted by on July 09, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Yonah Jeong

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