Analysis of the path



A life of loneliness is upon me hollowness bewilderment a life of past time regrets; a life where happiness is fleeting even sadness-so a place where even satan himself wouldn't go. A place where time wouldn't flow and even a place our god couldn't go even though I walk this treacherous path I still walk through without even the deadliest laugh.-Ishmel walker


Scheme A
Poetic Form
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Characters 361
Words 63
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
Lines Amount 1
Letters per line (avg) 292
Words per line (avg) 62
Letters per stanza (avg) 292
Words per stanza (avg) 62

About this poem

I wrote this poem because I was kinda sad and this is just how I was feeling at the time kinda still feel this way

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Written on April 18, 2022

Submitted by ishmel_w on June 09, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ishmel Walker

I'm from South Carolina I moved to New Mexico because my mother said I was a troublesome kid so I moved with my father I'm currently 18 and I have goals in life But I notice I put roadblocks in my own way for no reason well maybe their is a reason maybe fear and life I'm trying to find people that will grow with me you know what Socrates said people are like dirt they can either nourish you and help you grow as a person or they can stunt your growth and make you wilt and die more…

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