Analysis of I wish I could let me free from pain



I wish I could let me free from pain
leaving me in this crowd alone
with mark of goodness in my soul
letting me thrive in this crowd alone,
a painful scar parting me alone
residing underneath the empty heart
full of emptiness emerging color of blackness
like a Dark night without star,
an attempt in erasing such painful scar
falling from me miles apart
releasing a feeling of oneness
like living with me since long,
merging of such painful mark
with my wrecked heart
releasing a feeling of boldness
in the midst of such anguish storm
now tenderness of my heart
buried down in debris of painful scar
igniting a monster in my heart
unleashing the softness of heart,
trying to turn my monster heart
to become alike the  past
scenario of stormy star
stopping me from being soft,
I wish I could let me free from pain


Scheme AbcbbdeffdeghdeidfdddjfkA
Poetic Form Tetractys  (24%)
Metre 111111111 10101101 11110011 101101101 010110101 010010101 1110001010110 1011011 10100101101 1011101 010010110 1101111 1011101 1111 010010110 00111101 1100111 1010011101 010010011 01001011 10111101 1010101 01001101 1011101 111111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 821
Words 162
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 25
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 658
Words per stanza (avg) 150
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Submitted by on July 05, 2022

Modified on April 27, 2023

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