Analysis of I wish I could let me free from pain
I wish I could let me free from pain
leaving me in this crowd alone
with mark of goodness in my soul
letting me thrive in this crowd alone,
a painful scar parting me alone
residing underneath the empty heart
full of emptiness emerging color of blackness
like a Dark night without star,
an attempt in erasing such painful scar
falling from me miles apart
releasing a feeling of oneness
like living with me since long,
merging of such painful mark
with my wrecked heart
releasing a feeling of boldness
in the midst of such anguish storm
now tenderness of my heart
buried down in debris of painful scar
igniting a monster in my heart
unleashing the softness of heart,
trying to turn my monster heart
to become alike the past
scenario of stormy star
stopping me from being soft,
I wish I could let me free from pain
Scheme | AbcbbdeffdeghdeidfdddjfkA |
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Poetic Form | Tetractys (24%) |
Metre | 111111111 10101101 11110011 101101101 010110101 010010101 1110001010110 1011011 10100101101 1011101 010010110 1101111 1011101 1111 010010110 00111101 1100111 1010011101 010010011 01001011 10111101 1010101 01001101 1011101 111111111 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 821 |
Words | 162 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 25 |
Lines Amount | 25 |
Letters per line (avg) | 26 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 658 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 150 |
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