Analysis of 4:33 am



we were just two kids with broken hearts
both desperate for love and affection
what we had
was beautiful, wild and dark
it was promising
all our “forever’s”
and “always”
and “tomorrow’s”
too bad that we
that us,
was built upon a lie
and nothing beautiful
can live in the dark abyss of lies


Scheme ABCDEAFGHIJKL
Poetic Form
Metre 101111101 110110010 111 1100101 11100 1101 01 001 1111 11 110101 010100 110010111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 307
Words 57
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 226
Words per stanza (avg) 54
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Submitted by jaxonhurst on July 04, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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