Analysis of Better Is The Love Made



Never felt it bitter.
Or ever kept to keep a grudge.
Better is the love made.
During the rain.
And long after thunder.
When Winter cold and snow melts to go.
Bringing fresh buds,
In Spring to witness grow.
Better is the love made.

Better done are the cool breezes,
Welcoming those delightful Summer nights.
Holding hands under the Moon light bright.
Touching closer to hug and kiss,
That someone special to cuddle tight.
Better is the love made.
To know what is felt feels just right.

Better during the rain.
Becoming even better after,
The change of mood and attitudes leave.
Clearing the air.
From whatever prevented,
Two in love not to freely breathe.
To know it felt and kept left believed,
Love to give and it returned received...
Is there to share.
Or may go elsewhere temporarily.

No matter the season.
Nor clouds to come to cover the Sun.
Better is the love made to make.
And it done.
Together.
No matter the weather.
With that someone special.
In a warm inviting bed.
Caring.
Shown to make known.

With nothing else left heard said to say.
To know,
So much better is the love.
If kept to stay,
Where it is and meant to be.
Forgiving to understand,
What is understood!
Made to make even better.
To forget it not for what it is!


Scheme axBcadxdB exfxfBf caxgxxhhgi jjxjaaxxxx kdxkixxae
Poetic Form Tetractys  (27%)
Metre 101110 11011101 101011 1001 011010 110101111 1011 011101 101011 10110110 1001010101 101100111 10101101 11101101 101011 11111111 101001 010101010 01110101 1001 110010 10111101 111101101 111010101 1111 11110100 110010 111111001 10101111 011 010 110010 11110 0010101 10 1111 110111111 11 1110101 1111 1110111 010101 1101 1111010 101111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,238
Words 274
Sentences 36
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 9, 7, 10, 10, 9
Lines Amount 45
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 192
Words per stanza (avg) 45
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Written on July 03, 2022

Submitted by lpahtillah on July 03, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:22 min read
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